tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7854932864648424898.post4593386168688539949..comments2023-10-14T08:20:40.438-07:00Comments on Ayesha's Saudade: Look at me slaveAyeshahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13021584294809647967noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7854932864648424898.post-6966207646059573272010-01-15T15:00:59.881-08:002010-01-15T15:00:59.881-08:00U got that right Ron. Indeed i can take care of my...U got that right Ron. Indeed i can take care of myself. Even more so than this Noor person could imagine. Nevertheless, ur comment warmed my heart, as it's rare someone stands up for me in CyberLand.Ayeshahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13021584294809647967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7854932864648424898.post-46419663838023739012010-01-15T02:33:58.093-08:002010-01-15T02:33:58.093-08:00Anal retentive Noor? I'm not very fond of '...Anal retentive Noor? I'm not very fond of 'new' spelling as I consider it the step brother of spelling mistakes, however, knowing Ayesha's style of writing for a number of years your critique is misplaced. Call it her style, her way of communicating, whatever, it's simply the way Ayesha writes, so you either like it or you don't. I happen to like the message and description of boots, heels, spit… (needless to say it ‘moved' something in my groin as well ;-) Besides, Ayesha hardly needs me to stand up for her; she can do perfectly herself! It's like any other writer; take Faulkner for example, you either like his style or you don't. It's got nothing to do with being more 'convincing' and while we are on the subject of eyesores, your statement that the writer comes across as 'ignorant' IS an eyesore. You drop that little adjective into your text without any motivation at all! Ignorance implies lacking education, knowledge or sophistication. How do you know this about Ayesha? Since you don't know this I can only assume ignorance on your part.Ronaldnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7854932864648424898.post-54703474240587185472010-01-12T10:39:01.238-08:002010-01-12T10:39:01.238-08:00Behold, let it be known then, written in stone, bu...Behold, let it be known then, written in stone, burnt in the heavens, and spread among all bloggers dwelling on land, at sea, in the air, or wherever they're hiding: Ayesha doesn't want to be taken seriously. Period!Ayeshahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13021584294809647967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7854932864648424898.post-23733323412983337222010-01-12T08:51:06.980-08:002010-01-12T08:51:06.980-08:00You may spell like this via text on a cell phone, ...You may spell like this via text on a cell phone, but as a blogger if you want to be taking seriously - this is not the " new way " to spell!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7854932864648424898.post-34059771827934057992010-01-12T08:20:22.106-08:002010-01-12T08:20:22.106-08:00Oh gosh....really? But that's awful. Um....or ...Oh gosh....really? But that's awful. Um....or was that awesome? Geeeez, i have to look that up.<br /> <br />But.......pssssst.....those r not abbreviations u know. Where have u been? It's the new way to spell!Ayeshahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13021584294809647967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7854932864648424898.post-52768164106424277292010-01-12T01:50:22.160-08:002010-01-12T01:50:22.160-08:00Your writing is interesting, however you would sou...Your writing is interesting, however you would sound way more convincing, if you wouldn't use abbreviations such as " ur, u, r " !<br /><br />It gives me as a reader a eyesore and makes you as the writer look ignorant.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com