Monday, October 26, 2009

Where.........



Where innocence poisons
A virgin’s vomit
Impotence is sweet
Like the scum of the Earth

Where honesty is preached
Liars r gathering
And heroes
Stink

Where corruptive crime
Leaves marks of loyalty
On corroded politicians
The divine is not far

Where love is bragged
In slimy ways
Lovers
Decompose
..........................

Where did u hide
Love of my life
Eternal slave
When i looked for u

Where were u
Father of my child
The time
I called on u
..........................

Where promises r made
Chains must be in place
No space allowed
To move

Where i go
Fear is common now
Where i am
Decay lost its place


6 comments:

  1. Once more, much to ponder. And again, you leave a seed, implanting the need to come back, take another look.

    There are some original/interesting/flabbergasting juxtapositions. AND you make the reader speculate, not just about meaning but also about the author.

    The first two lines compel one to read further. A powerful piece.


    Keisha

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  2. My poetry always tells something about me, and something that made an impact on my life. Can be very direct, via a metaphor, a hint, even a riddle. If a poem doesn't carry something personal, i consider it junk. Poetry, like any other expression of art, should always reveal something about its author. And i don't mean something trivial, something superficial, or something safe, if u get my drift.

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  3. Being a dominant woman, wouldn't you like to be a female slave-driver in charge of naked male chained galley-slaves who toil and sweat on their oars with your self having total power over them?

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  4. This might surprise u, (hmmmm probably not at all, hehehe), but i am already, oh NotSoAnonymousOne.

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  5. Which of these fem-dom fantasies do you like the best?

    A. Being carried around by four naked collared male slaves on a sedan-chair.
    B.Looking at lot's of naked chained male slaves and then buying one of them in a slave-auction.
    C. Being pulled around on a ricshaw by a naked harnessed male slave.
    D.Sitting in a carriage being pulled by lot's of naked muscle-bound chained male
    slaves.
    E. Having a naked male slave who is chained outside to a wall and you would sit on a throne like chair and have him clean and polish your shoes or boots as a shoe shine slave.

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  6. Lol, r u crazy? None of those! Utterly vanilla stuff. And u know that too!

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